Love at altitude

Ah wouldn't we all love to be in love with super hero, though I hear orgasms can be risky...lol This definitely adds a new dimension to the term "flaming Gay" I really like the fellow in the fore ground, but the render itself falls a little flat. Now I just did a render just little this, there was so much detail that things started blending together. It is not so bad this, but like in mine there is so much going on in the back ground it sort of takes away from what is happening in the fore ground. While much of your work is art, this here is clearly an illustration, there is a difference though many times it is in the eye of the beholder... I don't know what I would have done here to clear denote what is fore ground, mid ground and back ground as th mid ground and back ground sort of melt into each other. More color or high lighting in the wings perhaps, I don't know as I said I just finished making a render much like this and I didn't come up with a solution on mine either, I just sort of gave up after making a big mess of it...lol Some times try as you might your idea or "vision" sort of fades or gets scrambled in your head and just doesn't come out right....